Words
Tumbling from our lips...
Your line
And then
Mine
Innocuous ...pure...
And in between the lines
Suspended
Electric moments...
A will
A hunger
A devotion
and a breath...
Flowing
As one loving caress
Surging through me
Riding my gut
Reaching my chest
You collapse
Letting flow
Your molten need...
Finding a place
Inside my heart...
Tuesday, July 14, 2009
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The closest thing to complete rapture, would to be the object of your passion...
...Or to nail you first on a post!!
:) naughty G man
The passionate sex of emotional being.
Somebody needs to get home to her man.... But if you can't wait that long...(He leered..) Hot stuff today, dear!
The late Jerzy Kosisnski,("The Painted Bird" author), known for his foibles as a writer, would ask of his editorial girls, "Poeticize this love scene for me."
Oh he could have used your talent!
Wow steamy!
Hi Mona youre still in Calif?
Why not come to San Francisco for the weekend with your sister.
We could meet!
♥
I love "electric moments." Precious piece. D
Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just you?
Should one just read the lines or also "between the lines"?
G-Man direct and to the point.
Myself, I got this book on the G-spot. Couldn't find anything. Lost the friggin' book.
Oh you have such a wonderful way with words Mona - excellent!
that is indeed a magic moment
wow...very mellifluous :)
Afternoon delight, or midnight delight..or early morning, before the shower delight. It's all good!
Wow! That is one steaming piece of poetry.
Oh Mona, that was so passionate and beautiful. I have finally checked out your site and plan to spend some time this weekend reading back stuff. Your comments on WM are so lovely, insightful and joyous to read. x
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