Friday, October 29, 2010

Friday Flash 55ve Fiction

Man rushes into brothel:"I want a girl with AIDS!

Madame: What!? Are you suicidal?

Man: Well... If I get AIDS so will my wife. If she gets it so will my father. And then; so will my mother.If she gets it my neighbor Tom will know what one gets if they f*** someone's mother!

(This is a temporary post , which will self destruct!)

28 comments :

Brian Miller said...

haha...in a very sad way...

Trée said...

Mona, no one writes like you. And I love it, how you never not amaze. May the sun walk with you. Take care my friend.

anthonynorth said...

Definitely hard hitting.

She said...

would that make him a serial killer, then? (I watch too much crime television!) a VERY scary 55!

Thanks for vising my one shot this week entitled Hold My Hand

My friday 55 is up, too - HERE

Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Mona!

snowelf said...

That's a wicked little turn of events!! ;)

--snow

Eric Alder said...

Reminds me of the one where... well, never mind. Weird 55.

Monkey Man said...

"....so will my father"? That's creepier than my maske story today.

My 55 is HERE .

Deepak Gopy said...

:)

Mona said...

tree? Oh No! That is the most terrible horrible whimsical 55ve I ever wrote uptil now!

Its a Halloween scare bug buddy!

Bubba, Thank you for recognizing its weird !

Alice Audrey said...

It really is a "horrible, whimsical" 55. Too sad to be a joke, but too much fun to take seriously.

Jen said...

That's way too much effort...just slash his tires.

Lulda Casadaga said...

Mona this is so funny...and so unlike you...that's why it makes it the best! p.s. Can I have what you're drinkin? :P

jodi said...

Mona, ewwwwww. That dude is a dumbass if I've ever heard of one!

ivan said...

Mona,

I'm convinced it's my fault in influencing this familial, um, piece.

I think you've been reading my blog too much. Two-ways becoming four-ways, and the lonesome bachelor who is the fifth wheel in the piece, finds out that five into four won't go--or will it...Come in from behind?

What is that famous Indian shrine
whose centre features an entire crowd of statues hot in the act of coitus?
Hey, this Bud's for you?

ivan said...

Mona,

I'm convinced it's my fault in influencing this familial, um, piece.

I think you've been reading my blog too much. Two-ways becoming four-ways, and the lonesome bachelor who is the fifth wheel in the piece, finds out that five into four won't go--or will it...Come in from behind?

What is that famous Indian shrine
whose centre features an entire crowd of statues hot in the act of coitus?
Hey, this Bud's for you?

G-Man said...

Mona Please......

magiceye said...

brilliant!

moondustwriter said...

tragic really - that it can go that many directions but I'm sure even more than that

a sobering 55

have a great weekend

moonie smiles

Mona said...

Ivan. It could be you. What with the eff word...

Gman...I know, I know....

Mona said...

Lulda. Here...you can have my Bourvita Milk. That is what I drink!

ivan said...

Mona,

Yep. I fear it's my bad influence.
DOM and his blog.

Ah well, fok it!

the walking man said...

Extremely twisted logic in that...but then why did it make so much sense to so many people?

joanny said...

Mona

I don't know why but I did find it humorous in a crazy off beat sort of way..... exactly pretty clever of you.

nice 55er,

joanny

Olivia said...

Mona- very intense..
I like the honesty and the raw vengeance that it expresses.. very well done.. :

PattiKen said...

Oh, my. Now that's retaliation.

lime said...

that's a lot of trouble to spread to make one's point!

KB said...

Scary stuff. Happy Halloween.

Peter said...

Fortunately the post is still there!

Sorry Mona, if I have been to absent, not commenting your latest posts, but I read them now. I have been a bit too busy lately. I will try to improve! :-)