Friday, February 18, 2011

Friday Flash 55ve Fiction ( Beast Fable #2 : MARRIAGE)

Once upon a time an elephant and an ant fell in love, and decided to marry. After their wedding, they left for their honeymoon.

And then they spend the rest of their life living happily ever after.

After the first night itself, the elephant died . Then SHE spend the rest of her life digging HIS grave.

19 comments :

G-Man said...

Monique!!!
Is this a parable?
hahahahaha...
I Love it!
Most excellent 55 My Dear.
I just Love it when you play.
Thanks Dr. Mona, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

G-Man said...

PS...
How do you say YAHTZEE in Hindi?

Monkey Man said...

This is a very deep 55. I LOVE it.

Stranger said...

Poor ant! I love it!

Brian Miller said...

ha...seems a rather tight metaphor...nice 55 mona...smiles.

moondustwriter said...

sucks for the ant...

I love your fables Mona keep "em coming

lime said...

she ought to just hold a family reunion and have all the colony feast on the carcass. they'd be done in short order.

ivan said...

Interesting parable about, say the U.S.-- and Canada as the ant.
Actually,it's about the Grasshopper next door.

the walking man said...

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...I guess it's easier to dig for an ant than an elaPHANT.

izzy said...

Ok I am amazed she didn't get crushed- good one! thanks.

knot eye said...

OUCH...but I admire the devotion of the ant, truly

Peace, hp

thank you for stopping by

anthonynorth said...

This works well on so many levels. Excellent.

TALON said...

lol! This was terrific! Poor ant!

Anonymous said...

Deep. And frustrating. Poor ant needs to call in a some heavy equipment.

hope said...

So glad to see you playing! And you made me smile. :)

Have a wonderful week to come!

Maude Lynn said...

Sounds about right!

joanna said...

Mona

You are wonderful, I had a very busy week and a very busy Saturday, then I tuned into your blog, and your humor lifted my spirits, I read it a couple of times because it was so darn funny and made me laugh out loud.

Joanny

Akelamalu said...

Not a match made in heaven was it? ;)

PeterParis said...

So, se chose an elephant with all the male ants she could have had! :-) I learn that the ant queens can live some 30 years ... I wonder if she had the time to finish?