Friday, June 3, 2011

Friday Flash 55ve Fiction: Brain Damage

Why are you looking tense?

Me? You look even more tense!

My tension is due to your tension...

Well...mine is Attention related...

Atension? Oh Okay...come to think of it I too have Btension , Ctension and Dtension ...

What?? What kind of tension is that???

Vitamin Deficiency! What else?

Uh...you sure are suffering from it...

20 comments :

Brian Miller said...

hehe i got Dtension once..ok maybe a few times...but that was long ago...

Monkey Man said...

Is that present of past tense.

anthonynorth said...

Quite a tense post ;-)
Enjoyed that.

Alice Audrey said...

Dtension? My kids can relate.

Mona said...

Brian, Yikes! That must be worst kind of tension! I heard it breaks your bones...;P

TALON said...

That is a lot of tension! I loved it, Mona (and it didn't make me tense a bit) :)

Pheromone Girl said...

I laughed so hard when I read this - we talk like this at work all the time!

G-Man said...

Intense!
Most excellent word play 55 Monique
You intentionally Rocked This Out!
Thank You for your wonderful support today Mona Dear, I really appreciate it.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

magiceye said...

:) fun 55

ivan said...

This has me thumbing back to my old book of literary terms to find once again what assonance is.

Tension producinhg business!

Mona said...

Ivan, I can't post comments on your blog! Some problem there!

Leo said...

Like Brian, I got Dtension too, quite a lot of times :D Heheh!

the walking man said...

I have Notension span

Linda said...

I love this comical exchange and word play.

Olivia said...

Dtension..... never!
Tension.. aah don't you see how smug it's become hearing about itself..?

Weekend Hugs xx

ivan said...

Hi Mona.

Heh. I thought I'd laid an egg with the current literary adventure...Nuttin' in comments from anybody.
And I had to use some ingenuity over here at http://www.creativewriting.ca myself at getting to comment in my own space.

Then I see that people have been trying to get into Ivan's comment space with no luck.

I'll have to consult my techie, though damn, this always happens on a weekend!

Thanks for trying anyway...You might get in by using mozilla.

In French: Oate de foque!

lime said...

dtension? what did you do to get in trouble with the teacher so she gave you that? ;)

Peter said...

Sincere thanks for your kind intention to bring all these x-tentions to our attention!

Mona said...

Hey Guys, I had a great confusion regarding this piece! I had a different idea about detention ( In India it only means being n police custody)!!So when your comments came pouring in, i was horrified about how cool the people of America were about their 'detention'!

But now, the misunderstanding has been cleared up! It really gave me a great tension!!

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