Why are you looking tense?
Me? You look even more tense!
My tension is due to your tension...
Well...mine is Attention related...
Atension? Oh Okay...come to think of it I too have Btension , Ctension and Dtension ...
What?? What kind of tension is that???
Vitamin Deficiency! What else?
Uh...you sure are suffering from it...
Friday, June 3, 2011
Friday Flash 55ve Fiction: Brain Damage
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hehe i got Dtension once..ok maybe a few times...but that was long ago...
Is that present of past tense.
Quite a tense post ;-)
Enjoyed that.
Dtension? My kids can relate.
Brian, Yikes! That must be worst kind of tension! I heard it breaks your bones...;P
That is a lot of tension! I loved it, Mona (and it didn't make me tense a bit) :)
I laughed so hard when I read this - we talk like this at work all the time!
Intense!
Most excellent word play 55 Monique
You intentionally Rocked This Out!
Thank You for your wonderful support today Mona Dear, I really appreciate it.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
:) fun 55
This has me thumbing back to my old book of literary terms to find once again what assonance is.
Tension producinhg business!
Ivan, I can't post comments on your blog! Some problem there!
Like Brian, I got Dtension too, quite a lot of times :D Heheh!
I have Notension span
I love this comical exchange and word play.
Dtension..... never!
Tension.. aah don't you see how smug it's become hearing about itself..?
Weekend Hugs xx
Hi Mona.
Heh. I thought I'd laid an egg with the current literary adventure...Nuttin' in comments from anybody.
And I had to use some ingenuity over here at http://www.creativewriting.ca myself at getting to comment in my own space.
Then I see that people have been trying to get into Ivan's comment space with no luck.
I'll have to consult my techie, though damn, this always happens on a weekend!
Thanks for trying anyway...You might get in by using mozilla.
In French: Oate de foque!
dtension? what did you do to get in trouble with the teacher so she gave you that? ;)
Sincere thanks for your kind intention to bring all these x-tentions to our attention!
Hey Guys, I had a great confusion regarding this piece! I had a different idea about detention ( In India it only means being n police custody)!!So when your comments came pouring in, i was horrified about how cool the people of America were about their 'detention'!
But now, the misunderstanding has been cleared up! It really gave me a great tension!!
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