Saturday, March 12, 2011

Friday Flash 55ve Fiction :Beast Fable #3 ( Measure for Measure)

On one of his rounds, God found a donkey weeping.

"What's the matter?" He asked

" Its Man. He treats us so badly; overburden us , and sometimes puts his whole self on our backs and make us trudge uphill".

"Thou shalt be avenged." Spake God.

Since then, every man carries an ass(w)hole on him.

20 comments :

Monkey Man said...

Very cute parable.

dustus said...

I think this is brilliant. The irony of an ass (donkey) calling out Mankind in front of God for acting like, well, and ass. Cheers

G-Man said...

Monique...
A bit naughty on the word play today.
But I have in deed heard worse out of your mouth.
Loved your Fableistic 55 My Dear.
You Rock The Planet Baby.
Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

ha. and here i thought you might go the man hater way...calling us ass(w)holes....lol

Jingle said...

what a creation,
your imagination impresses me.
way to go.
love your 55.
cheers.

Peter said...

It's nice to get the history of mankind explained! :-)

jason evans said...

I think we have them metaphorically too!

Steve Isaak said...

Love this, perfect. Will remember this for a long time.

Mama Zen said...

Love it!

PattiKen said...

That is so clever. Good on you!

JR's Thumbprints said...

No wonder my back is aching.

gautami tripathy said...

Excellent...

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kavisionz said...

hahahahahha...awesome!! Serves mankind right for treating an ass like an ..well.. ass! :)

You are one witty gal, Mona!! :)
xoxox

the walking man said...

Mona me thinks ye may be loosening up a bit. probably from the teaching thing. They say that makes one slightly nuts.

lime said...

bwahahahha! good one mona. but why are women saddled with themas well ;)

jodi said...

Mona, what a cute play on works! I feel sorry for the ass!

ivan said...

Let us be inspiring?

The Asscent of Man?

ivan said...

Well,
Let us be inspirational.

The ass cent of man?

ivan said...

The ass-end of Man?

ivan said...

Mona,

I can't seem to get into your comment space today.

Maybe it's just as well, as I have another smart-ass comment to make.

Like let's be inspirational!

The ass cent of Man?